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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ 
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Lakewalker~Look what you started...LOL Now I like writing these things...Im trying to write these more then a regular poem!!! < !signature-->Love Love is a feeling, that is one of the greatest, that we should all feel. **I hope yous like these that I am posting...I know its not some of my best work but I am trying to learn more things...Thanks for reading it!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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shadydaze Member
since 2000-10-02
Posts 85 |
i agree with you love is the greatest feeling but it hurts sometimes |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Shadydaze~Yes indeed it does...Thanks for reading this and replying to it... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Erin, I've been away and missed something. What is this trend. Please explain. I like it though, it is something new. Keep them coming; whatever they are. jason  I'm not concieted...I'm convinced. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jason~Even though you dont know what it is Im glad you like it...There is a thread in the Teen Explorer about all this stuff if you wanna check it out... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Erin I agree that everyone should feel love at some point. Very nice Haiku I've been away too, I just got back. I want to see what trend this is. This place does not feel the same now, as when I first got here. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was good......but i read haiku's that sound a bit different. LIke.....they have some sort of DEEPER meaning or something. I'm not sure. I don't know. The haiku was great though, very simply written. I don't find haiku's to be hard at all. I mean, in the style that i see done here. But i have tried the ones i read by these ancient chinese philosopher dudes and i can't seem to write those as well. ANYWAY! keep it up! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Erin- this is a great thought, I like it  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Thanks for the replies you guys...I didnt really like this one for some reason though...I just had it in my head when I was writing it... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
What's up girlie?!? How's life treatin ya? I have yet to pull myself from the deep dark depression I have fallen into. Anways, What a great write. Keep it up girl! I think it is great that you are taking Lakewalker's challenge. Maybe I'll even be adventerous and try it. Keep it up girl I like 'em. Luv2LuvYa Love ALways ~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~sMiLe! It MaKeS yOuR bUtT ShInE~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Sorry it took me so long to reply to this  Maybe I should follow your example and start writing these haikus too. You have inspired me to. keep it up weirdo  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Erin Erin is inspiration Gives me things to write, Ideas to convey to all "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey, hey! Great poem! Simple and sweet...Keep up the good work ok? And by the way, I love your quote! It's so true! Hope to talk to ya later... Lotsa Love, Angel |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You guys are all the greatest!!!Thanks so much for the replies!!!  ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well i got my daily chuckle from this one.... i think its good that you are exploring new things too...do keep exploring allright  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Kaile~ What do you mean by "you got your daily chuckle out of this"???? People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
Great Poem, you write with such passion... look forward to seeing more!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Love is so precious We must charish it always For it is fragile These are kinda fun to wirte.. almost a little adictive. Keep up the good work< !signature--> "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
cos i think you have expressed a fundamental truth within a few words...this one hit home for me |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
I absolutely love this!! Thanx so much ERIN for sharing this great poem Cuz it is so true!! how was that??? Hehe I am not very good at writing these!! Well great job! Keep it up!! Much Luv, ~*~Priscilla~*~< !signature--> ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is great work! i gotta try it now LOL looking forward to seeing more soon!!~*Pixie*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Love IS the greatest......period. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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