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If I Tell You I Love You
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If I Tell You I Love You |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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If I tell you I love you Will you walk away Or will you decide to Stay for forever and a day? If I tell you I love you Will you say the same Or will you decide to Leave as fast as you came? If I tell you I love you Will you look into my eyes Or will you decide to Tell me nothing but lies? If I told you I love you Just what would you do Would you say I love you to And admit the feeling is new? If I told you I love you Would you have to disagree Just what would you do If you didn't love me? Well guess what? I love you Now whad do you have to say? Will it be "I love you too" Or will you be on your way? ~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is one of the best poems i've read here. and i like the question of fate at the end about which will happen. good job I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Susie -- I really like this poem because it so closely matches what I feel about for a guy right npw. As for me, it looks like he's going to "walk away" but I hope it works out for you. Good poem. Love, Crysta; Maybe God has us meet a few wrong people so that when we meet the right one we can truly appreciate the gift. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Jeremiah~ Thanks. I'm glad you liked it  . Crysta~ Thanks. Sorry to heart that. This poem isn't about me, just something I wrote while I was sitting on my bed before . Thanks again!~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Well expressed one eventhough it was out of your imagination.... Sincerely A_L |
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QTpieOmy Junior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 11Illinois |
Susie~ Excellent poem! It really made me think. I'll be looking for more of your work! |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
A_L~ Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it !QTpieOmy~ Thanks .~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Alpiner New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 9 |
I LOVE YOU. And if you want i'll be with you forever and a day. Love forever, Rich |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That was really good! I can totally relate to that. Keep it up! So the poem wasn't about you? Bel |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Sweetheart~ Thanks but the poem wasn't about us. I know you love me and I love you too .Isabel~ No, not about me  . Just came to me in a matter of minutes.~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, saying those words and wondering what the other person will feel is so hard...but it's one of those things ya have to do....a very powerful, yet sweet verse here. I enjoyed it greatly, Miss Angel! *Krista Knutson* "Cherish your vision; Cherish your ideals; Cherish the music that stirs in your heart, the beauty that forms in your mind, the loveliness that drapes your purest thoughts. If you remain true to them, your world will at last be built." ~James Allen~ "We've made houses for hatred...it's time we made a place where people's souls may be seen and made safe"...~Jewel~ |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Miss Alwye ~So glad you enjoyed it . That means a lot to me. Yes, something we must say. Thanks again .~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Susie, Gorgeous poem....I lvoe it....did make me teary eyed. Funny how much goes thru someone's mind to say something as powerfull as "I Love You" to someone. Very true You caught all the feelings and questions thatt goes thru someone's heart and mind. great job I've said those words once in my lifetime and i got played  lookign forward to seeing your other poems |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
Acire~ I'm so glad you thought I expressed the thought of someone going through this ok, that's what I was worried about . I'm sorry about your experience, it's happened to me before too  . I know it sucks. Thanks again .~Susie "If we could read the secret history of our enemies, we should find in each man's life sorrow and suffering enough to disarm all hostility." ~Henry W |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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