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Finally a new one |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
I have finally wrote another poem. I have had some serious mental blocks and hadn't been able to write anything but i think this one is decent. See what yout ink Days, minutes, seconds fly by i wonder around at the way side the smiles and laughter without a care i see past their lies but do i dare tempted to open blinded eyes but i realize that we live our lies despite i set a mission from now till then right now it starts, right now i begin without a clue where to start or go i can't explain how this will work, i just know set back and tell me i will fail i've heard it before, though i will prevail darkened is my heart from what i see the lies we live with such zelous glee please take to heart these of mine look at your watch, you're almost out of time There's a fine line between genius and insanity. I have erased this line. -- Oscar Levant "Death is not the greatest loss in life. The greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live." |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
I think you did a nice job on this poem. I hope to read more of your poem. lovely_Kris |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was great, it's very well written. I think it's the first I've read by you, and I can't wait to read more  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
hoppy~~~good to see you back!!!this is good...keep up the good work!!!hope that this writers block passes...by the way PoetdeVine post some things in the Teen Explorer that might help you...i know it helped me!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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