Teen Poetry #3 |
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I Lied |
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Poetry Princess Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28Des Moines, IA |
"Hi I am 20 years old and no longer a teen but I wrote this poem when I was 18 and still in high school. Just thought I would share it. Hope you like it" I LIED Loving someone is something I've never done I never stopped to care I was just having fun But then I opened my heart to one special guy And then I made a mistake and I told a lie Now I know he will never trust me again Because when he's gone he'll ask where I've been Yet there are alot of things he doesn't understand Like I miss the simple touch of his hand I've grown so attached I just can't let him go But my mistake will never go away and this I know I can never change what I've done no matter how hard I try And once things are dont they are done with no answer to why I can't explain what I did and I can't make it right So now I want to run and hide before it starts another fight Because now when he looks at me he thinks of that day And I know he'll never understand no matter what I say Yet I know what I did was wrong everytime I look in his eyes But once someone doesn't trust you they think all you do it tell lies POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You did a great job of telling how you feel about this But once someone doesn't trust you they think all you do it tell lies This is so true sometimes. I like this a lot, thanks for sharing it with us ![]() |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
oh wow!!!this is soo good...i like it alot...but i dont see how lakewalker thinks that the one line is true...it might be but i dont think it is...if i didnt trust someone i wouldnt think that all they would tell me is lies...anyways good work!!!who cares if your not a teen anymore i would like to see more of your work... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
wounderful poem and I think you did a great job. I hope you can earn his trust back and things work out. I hope to read more of your work. Lovely_Kris |
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