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Poetry(my thoughts) |
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JR Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 22morris il |
This one isnt a love poem but im sure you will enjoy reading it as much as i enjoyed writing it. Poetry i strare at an empty page, I must fill it up. I must fill it with my emotion. I'll never give up. It might take a second, a hour, a minute. I won't give up; I can't. Sometimes its about life or people in it, but its poetry most of all I live in it. no matter what my dillema is, Poetry aslves it every time. poetry is my live I can tell it is, I write it for my life. I write poetry of every sort. poems of love, hate, poems of strife, I'll use poetry to win love. I'll use petry to show my life. --JR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i like this one...how you put "ill never give up"...i havent given up on this one challenge by lakewalker but yet its like i cant find the right words...he posted the challenge a couple days ago...maybe a week and im still trying...anyways sorry about me going on and on...keep up the good work... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, nice poem. I really liked it. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "True love last forever" |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very nicely writ, welcome to passions btw unless you are actually Jer. Poet DeVine gave us a hit that he was back  Keep writing anyhow! Salooma |
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