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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people 
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Dail up connect username password enter new indentity [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-19-2000).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Nifty, a lot of people are like that. Nice way of expressing it. ,._-=-^~* Jeremy *~-^=-_., "I will know where I'm headed, 'cause I'm so tired of the suffering, I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection." ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
It is so true that many of us hide behind our user names, become people we aren't. Great work!  *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
This is disturbing, but true…. ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
short and sweet and to the point and it is all true...people can be whoever they want on the net...it may be good for some people but for other creepy people...not so good |
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Lurdburger Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 39Carlisle, Cumbria, England |
This is a great poem, but I don't see why people find the concept disturbing. I've found that people tend to be more open when they're online. I dunno if this could count as an example, but I've never shown any of my friends the poems I post here. I do know that a lot of my friends are more open whilst online though. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i agree with lurdburger~~~how people are more open...cuz what if your mad at someone its not like the people you tell can tell can say anything to anyone you know...its just like being secretive... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The beauty of poetry is that it can be taken in so many ways. Yes, this can be disturbing because it represents those sick people who come online and find little children to molest, but it also represents those who are more open and friendly online. I know I wouldn't share my poems with just anyone Thank you all for reading this and replying![This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-21-2000).] |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
You are wonderful with these, but I must say this is a disturbing thing...you can't even be safe in your own home or office. I wish they had internet police...now theres a plan! Salooma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Thanks for the reply, sometimes I think that's a really good idea. [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-22-2000).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very creative, and well done. I loved it loads!  ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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