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Meladorri Junior Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 14Indianapolis, IN |
love.. love dearly and deeply Love for all it's worth love.. love dearly, you won't know what you're missing until it's gone love... love deeply take advantage while you can feel it flow through your veins feel it shimmy down your legs feel the cold be touced by warmth the love you feel could be enough don't go searching, it won't be there... love will find you anywhere let yourself swim in it, swim with it, flow with it and let it flow through you the beauty of love is boundless... Let it come to you *don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened* |
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AndrewDL Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 24California |
this is good. its tells a lot about you and your definition of love and possible regrets of loving or having not loved. it really gives me a little bit of insight into who you are. keep it up. -Andrew Trust too much, and you may be deceived, but trust too little and you will live in torment forever. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem and great advice. Can't wait to read more  |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Simply beautiful and right on, just flow with love and let it feel right, You couldnt have said it any better. Such an insprirational poem, keep it going. Love, ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., "I will know where I'm headed, cause I'm so tired of the suffering I stand before you, a weakened version of your reflection" ~DMX~ "Prayer III" |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
ok this is a good poem...but the only part i dont like about it is "take advantage while you can"...i mean what are you trying to say???use this person???act as if you like them???i dont know...good work though... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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