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Falling (Lakewalker's Challenge)
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Falling (Lakewalker's Challenge) |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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Okay lakewalker here it is........its nothing great but im always up for a litle challenge! Struggling with my answers found I pick my feet up off the ground fighting to accept the truth But the is this aching in my heart and it is slowly tearing my apart I just don't want to believe it Somethign i did forced you to walk away No matter what i tried i couldn't make you stay Now I will never be the same Ill endeavor to put my life back together But i fear i'll be this way forever Im deteriating with out you here So now you are gone from this place vanashid without leaving a trace leaveing my alone...........and falling The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Oh, I like this a lot! Very well done, even if it was done quickly  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jen~~~you did a good job...i like this one...2 thumbs up for you!!! ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I think the challenge was well met! stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart some |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You met and exceeded the challenge nicely Jenabou! Well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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