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Sudden Revenge (Lakewalker's Challenge)
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Sudden Revenge (Lakewalker's Challenge) |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
Struggling with my answers found, I pick my feet up off the ground, Fighting to accept the truth, The effect of reality creates madness, Not overcome by the sense of sadness, Fighting to accept the truth, The blood covering my sinful hands, And no one will truly understand, Fighting to accept the truth, The knife falls silently on the floor, As I reach trembling for the door, Fighting to accept the truth, He tried to hurt me one more time, I told him I would commit this crime, Fighting to accept the truth, The abuse lost and pushed aside, I run fast and scared to try and hide, And fight with myself to accept the truth. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Wow...just....wow.. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow. Challenge well met! This is such a strong poem, it kind of got to me  Keep it up! |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very nice! wowie! fits your title alright...i liked it lots and i like your style...keep em coming! salooma |
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