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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
this is wrong i know its not right what can i do to stop this fight i love him so very much don't go i love you! thats it he's gone what did i do what could i have done wrong its been a year i just saw him he looked wonderful oh, how i miss him he's got a wife how nice oh, look there's a knife what am i crazy i can't live like this it hurts but not anymore... omg, what did i do its too late to say i love you maybe god'll forgive me..... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Nikki i to have felt something like this. it was about 5 years ago when the greatest love in my life was gunned down and killed and i thought like this but figured out that it don't get you anywhere. but i still think its great work. and hey i'm from Florida I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM. YOU SHOW YOUR FEELINGS AND HOW YOU STILL CARE. I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE GOING THROUGH. THE FIRST GUY I ACTUALLY FEEL IN LOVE WITH PLAYED ME FOR A FOOL. MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU. I FEEL YOUR PAIN. ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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ValerieB726 Junior Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 14Louisville,OH, USA |
It was great. I liked the way you used the words. I know how you feel because my first love treated me horrible, but I still love him. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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