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Bright Life |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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Your gleaming personality One that is unique Very special Very beautiful Gives you a bright life Your radiant friendship Cherished forever Welcomed everywhere Loved by all Gives you a bright life Your beautiful smile Very contagious Always seen Never upside-down Gives you a bright life Everything about you Your gleaming personality Your radiant friendship Your beautiful smile Gives you a bright life *I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender* |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This poem was awesome. You did a good job. Keep it up. Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
It is good to read you again Ender. I liked this piece. Good work. When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Lovely, only word to describe it, i love poems about these sort of topics, i cant wait to read more. bravo ,._-=-~^* Jeremy *^~-=-_., |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nicely penned Ender! The title and closing, compliment the positive sentiments contained within beautifully! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great poem, very well written  |
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