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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
My life sucks this pain I can't bear but nobody sems to care they come and ask are you okay but never do they really listen happy i do act but happy i am really not thought leavin this world the world that once was so kind to me is now but nothing i wish to see it just seems easier to leave for good i don't think anyone would miss me or do you think they would? Tell me what ya think! peace <3 Silent Life is to short to be pissed off all the time |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Of course you'd be missed, people just don't ever stop and realize what they're missing. Nice poem  |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Silent soul: This is a good poem. As I haven't read much of your work I will most certaintly be looking out for more pieces like this. Many people would miss you if you left this world. However, you should think of the people you would hurt before you decide to end it all. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Stop and think about all the ppl that are close friends to you..your family...you will be missed whether you think you will or not. Very good poem though. If you ever need someone to talk to be free to e-mail me or AIM me at isabelle lynn..i'll listen. Keep your head up. Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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Silent soul Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 73tx,usa |
Hey thanks ya'll if anyone cares heres my yahoo Im: depressedangel04 Aol Im: trendysaint peace <3 Silent Life is to short to be pissed off all the time |
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Godslilangel New Member
since 2000-08-11
Posts 3 |
really good poem and believe me people would miss ya! [This message has been edited by Godslilangel (edited 08-12-2000).] |
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