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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Blow free as natural air For if you're created you blow In a told direction I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremiah~nicely put. It's very true. I'm sure this holds a deeper and more true meaning to you, but I have my own ways of interpreting it. Keep writing! Always~*~Jessica~*~  "Love is the product of our discontentment with ourselves." "Bleeding hearts release tears of fire" "work like you don't need money, love like you've never been hurt,and live everyday as if it's your last" "Shoot for the moon, if you shall fall short, you always have the stars to fall upon" |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
wow, I love this one!! Geez, Jeremiah.. this is an awesome haiku.. don't ever stop writing, k? yeah.. very true, if u r free.. u rule yourself.. created? creator rules.. *_^ Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Jer Jon.. I just realized how well versed you are in the many forms of poetry...Haikus are pretty rare..it's nice to see some. Jeremy "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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