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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland 
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You have heard my sorrow song Its bile fingers penetrating your throat Each word hangs to your mouth on a hook. I grow weary of this, for today at least I am smugly tasting unadulterated peace. The water's stillness reflects light Stars sparkling on a crest fallen wave, The ripples tickle bathing skin In embryo purity I have not yet been baptised to your hollow eyed misery. Let the cavern ears carry my joyful echo I am laughing, shattering still sorrows to myself in this moment of bliss. ------------------ This poem exists for no better reason than just to exist, it is like a silly rhyme or simple thought It is a short holiday from miserable dissection and inner pondering think of this as not a statement but..... A SMILE.  "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Brian,...hooray! "I am smugly tasting unadulterated peace.",....awesome, right on!!! I'm so happy to have read this, so glad to see you smile. Wonderfully smiling words. Be well today and always. *Peace. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
This piece is a little different for you I think Brian. I liked it very much. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Brian...I, too, find enjoyment in your words. Sometimes we have to let go..and just enjoy life for what it is: Life. Hardrock |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
SpitFire, I smile and laugh a lot just not when writing poetry. I wrote this after some serious poems. Think I needed to smile. Thanks for your response. Marina, thanks Hardrock totally agree. Thanks "A frog, it cannot comprehend the sea Nor me happiness" Paul Draper-Mansun |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I am so glad you shared this, and the joy!! Somedays I just refuse to be unhappy, thats it I refuse! Seriously, this was very nice, and I wish you many more smiles!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
And what a beautiful smile it is!"Embryo purity"- what a beautiful phrase! I really loved this poem! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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