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Your Passion |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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The passsion that races Through my body As I think about you A thought of giving up hope For you are not here With me That passion always lasting Draining my soul of love Making it almost useless I wish for you to be here But that is all I can do For now -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know exactly what you mean...I share that passion..James |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Many have felt that passion..and that despair. Good job, Neala. Hardrock |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... understand what you mean here. Well written Neala!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Isn't it sad, when all we can do is wish, remember, plan for the future. Would that today could be better, for all of us. Lovely poem, very expressive. Sandra |
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meara Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 15 |
Neala- Well the only advice that I can give you is all you can really do is wait. -meara |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
How we can be driven by that passion, and the desire to want something so badly. Hope things turn out well for you!! I liked this very much!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Hey, Thanks everyone for replaying but like meara said all we can really do is sit there and wait.I guess that is just how is goes. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Great work! I can identify with this. |
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