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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
HEART Angels who bask in halos Neon rings of holiness Wings as fragile as glass As inconsistant as light Grace their slender backs They rise into the thick darkness Followed by streams of fire Tender Wise Young Their eyes hold the sea They translate as beauty to the mind For we cannot know their souls BLOOD What wonder and beauty The blood of your being The makings of you A creature of forgotten time Entrapped in a mortal vessel Your eyes betray eternity Your breath creates the oceans waves Your eyes reveal their depths Don't think I don't know your true self Don't think I can't see past your face Oh dear angel Where are your wings Did they break during your fall from heaven? However black their feathers be Let them enfold me PULSE Naked Pinned like a butterfly Naked save for the drippings of his own blood Boken wings Man- Crucified on the cross of God Crucified on the cross of knowlage Where angels fall And spatter their blood on the earth Seeds take root Where seeds take root A tree grows With beautiful sparkeling fruit. Eat not from this tree. This is the tree my servent's blood. And though you are holy And destined to become Seriphim If you eat from this tree Your fledgeling wings will shrivel And your place in heaven will be shut off forever We are angels Doomed to walk this earth For the fruit of the kings of heaven Were temptation Had we but known Had we been given as much chance to grow As that cursed tree Prehaps we would know better. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Wren...incredible stuff. I like the theme that crosses from one to the other. Well done. Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I am completely blown away,...enough said. WoW!!! Be well W. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Wren, your writing is so mystical, so beautiful. I love it! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
PS Your description of the angels' wings is absolutely awesome! Wings as fragile as glass As inconsistant as light Grace their slender backs They rise into the thick darkness Followed by streams of fire Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
spectacular!!!! this work is great!!!! |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
...speechless...absolutally extrodinary!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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