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Dark Poetry #2

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jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-07-23 02:55 AM

I grow tired of
dissecting
what we were

it runs a million
circles in
my head

I have decided
I don't want to be mad anymore

so I will pack you away
neatly
in the folds of
days past

and a million tons of
weight
from your urgent hands
is lifted off my back

breath of relief
in knowing that
perhaps

just maybe

I can be strong enough to
put my faith
in someone else

other than you

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

1 posted 2000-07-23 03:03 AM

Wow!
Brilliant.
The right decision and no doubt about it! You express so well a feeling I have experienced many times, when you have thought so much about a specific problem, or person who has hurt you it begins to become tedious, and then you know: at last I am free!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

bluebrdy65
Member

since 2000-05-16

Posts 276
Gladys,

2 posted 2000-07-23 11:39 AM

Great job here
we must all go on and try to trust
even though it hurts sometimes.

Great job

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