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just your soul ..... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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My body begins to shiver My eyes roll back in my head I am eager for the blood For my body has not fed I do not wish to hurt you Nor do I plan on letting you die I only want to taste your soul So please do not cry Your soul seems so beautiful Something I have never had Your lips are that of satin Thats why I am oh so sad I have never had your way of life My heart is made of blackened coal So just lean a little bit closer And let me taste your soul  Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
This is a masterpiece ! Some people are so afraid to be with another very intense person. The images you have painted apply so very well to many facets of getting to, and knowing a person. I definately know the feeling, thank you. Peace, Love, and Happiness... not necesarily in that order CD P.S. How do you vote for poems ? |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...Now THIS is the stuff Dark Passions is made of. I love it. Such a talent you are....Hardrock |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
ohhhhh, so many times I have been in this place. lovely words... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
DKW just another of your superb writings, loved the whole thing!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Dark_kisses_Within, What a nicely puttogether poem. I understand the feelings of wanting someones soul. LarBear |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwwww well thanks everyone!  I tried my best to rid myself of the "Dark" stuff. But HEY.... its me!  I am who I am and thats all that i am ! (shrugs) Anyways thanx everyone for all the support.  Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Your soul seems so beautiful Something I have never had Your soul was always beautiful; You always had it! Deepak |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Your soul seems so beautiful Something I have never had Your soul was always beautiful; You always had it! Deepak |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
I am thinking Vampires...Wow! I truly loved it. Keep em comin..Dee |
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