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Precious Death |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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(If you could see what is truly me...) If I lay bleeding, soul gapping with goldend stitches that close my dark mind broken, would you run from the deamons you would see entwined? If I lay bleeding, inner darkness devouring, with varacious appetite, my final breath, would you offer me unselfishly to Sweet, Precious, Death? "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Affy...another dark, dark poem. You sure have a way with words...the imagery you conjure is simply incredible. Hardrock |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I think we are two devils from the same hell. LOL. Great work !!! Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
As I lay bleeding..inner darkness devouring..very deep, excellent work The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow ali... you are so raw with your words. i love it. excellent questions to pose. makes me think. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Wow! How dark! I just loved it!  (Darkness rocks!) (And you do it so well!)-Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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