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angry affirmation |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
I am an angry goddess walking I am Kali-ma of Destruction Sehkmet the Lioness Cerridwen the Death-Hog You do well to remain meek-- you are beneath me I am no suckling kitten curled around myself inside I am the essence of the storm the howling wind you cannot put a name to I am inside your darkest, quivering, humiliating terror I am outside catalyzing that which makes you quake If you present me my proper respect (and that is great) I shall spare you. If not-- I shall turn my back on you-- and may dishonor take you wherever death may leave you. [This message has been edited by Portia (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Portia - this is awesome!!!! Where's that bit I like: 'I am no suckling kitten curled around myself inside I am the essence of the storm the howling wind you cannot put a name to' THAT rocks...the whole thing does... you have a great talent - I hope you know this...  K |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, strong statement, for all women. As always, I am enthralled with your words and ideas. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Portia...Such darkness. Simply AWESOME!!! This is some great stuff here. I grovel in your presence. Hardrock |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Wow! Good stuff Portia! |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Utterly breathtaking! As always! You have a very great talent, Portia! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Intense stuff, really enjoyed the poem. Remind me not to make you angry. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Cool! This poem rocks! Great job! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wwwhhoo whheeee i love it when people vent!!! i hope you feel just a little affirmed!! that line... you do well to remain meek... so powerful!!! loving this!!! helps me vent right along with ya. kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
Very powerful. Reminds me of a harsher "I Am Woman, Hear Me Roar". |
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