Dark Poetry #2 |
Understanding Man |
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Every man must set His own stage his own ways To life his life And love And if you Cross his path he's bound To shed some blood Because a man Holds few things dear But the things he Doe's are very near. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
VEry true, really liked this musing. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I agree with Brian...you have identified one special trait in all us men. Nice job, JJ. Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
How true, and well spoken!! From a woman that truly "gets" the difference.. Good job!!!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeremiah, So much truth in your words. Love this one!! Keep up the great work. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
once again... wonderful work my friend. keep it up!!! good to see you again. kynder |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jeremiah, this was a most effective poem. Last line especially touched me. Good to see you. Catalinamoon |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Men will be men so you keep on writing. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
An interesting piece Jeremiah. Men are certainly strange beings! Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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