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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Once upon a time a little girl hears a magic story. She learns to anticipate love with a proper prince. She is taught all her dreams will come true. She knows she has only to wish hard enough, and her fairy godmother will come, wand in hand. Her dull life will be transformed to perfection. She knows all this, there is no doubt. She waits patiently, years pass. It's only a matter of time, she can hold on. More years pass, she starts to change a little. There is a touch of gray in the lustrous princess curls. Her corset grows a little snug. She hates to admit it, but her doubts are growing. Maybe her godmother missed her, what with all the others waiting for her as well. Maybe the prince married someone else. She shudders a little, a cold chill grows near her heart. She resolutely steps in front of the fire, and denies the doubt. If she stops believing, she knows it will be over. Her lifes hopes and dreams. Her true love will never find her. She pushes the fear away. She addresses the shadows-"Begone! You will not steal my dream." And she picks up her book and continues to read.... |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
You'll always be a princess..as long as you believe. If I had that magic wand, I would make time stand still..at least until your prince arrived. Love the imagery here...could almost smell the fire, feel the cold....So good, Sandra...so good. Hardrock |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
I liked this one really well. I also loved that the aging princess wears a corset, so concerned with appearance. And the message that sitting and reading won't make the prince show up! www.fvpf.org |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
I wonder at times if we ever stop to think of the things we teach our childeren when they are small..."believe in fairy tales", but do not expect them to be yours in the end.... ironic is it not? This is lovely and sad, but such truth lingers in your words!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I can clearly see everything in this one Cat..your thoughts come alive, and I was drawn in. I want more!! This is quite moving...and you know your fairy tale isn't over..I won't allow it!! The fragrance always stays in the hand that gives the rose...--Hada Bejar |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Cat, Do I have to say anything? This one have a vision that we all wish for; except me a boy not a girl. We all have dreams. It just seams they get shattered. Good Job. Lar |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
dreams are important to have but its more important to do every thing we can to MAKE those dreams come true. this poem totally rocks! keep it up.  EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
*sniff* How sad! But the woman in the poem is right! Never give up hope! Great poem, wonderful as usual! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Cat,..."She addresses the shadows-"Begone! You will not steal my dream." ....Pow-er-ful!!! So sad a tale,...told so well. Take care you. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Ditto to the above! And a life with dreams is still better than one without! (see my sig!  )Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
From one Princess to another, the fairytale can still be real, as long as we "keep the dream alive", and your heart never ceases it's passion to write the poetry that touches the hearts of others like yours so deeply does. Elise |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
God... it's so imbarrasing to cry in the library in front of everybody, but I just couldn't resist... This was about me what you were writing, every single word. I have not enough words to express how much this had touched me because I was sure I'm the only one who has those dreams and doubts and though I know my prince has married another woman, I still try to chase my fears away and keep believing that the happy end will come. Thank you so much, I have to save it and keep it with me all the time. Take Care! [This message has been edited by LM (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Sandra, What a beautiful poem. I have read that same fairy tale, and I , too, refuse to put the book down. We have nothing left if we let go of our dreams. There is a song by Tori Amos that your poem reminds me of and one of the lines goes something like "mirror mirror wheres my crystal palace...but I only can see myself"....great post, I really enjoyed it. ....beth "I mean that loving you is strange and adored by me throughout..oh no it's you again, blessing you with every kiss..." |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
I don't believe anyone should try to achieve "fairy tale" standards in their relationships. That would be unfounded and disappointing, not to mention boring. Also, appearance used as a means of attracting a "prince" seems shallow and self-degrading. Believing in perfection and "one true love" is not a worthwhile dream; concentrating on the spirituality and goodness that can be found in simple, healthy, dual-sustaining relationships is a cause more valuable. I hope you can find the latter one-day, and realize the joy in it. Be well. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Surely I hope this girl attains her prince charming..........Good poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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