Dark Poetry #2 |
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What if... |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Is this Reality? I feel the rain Dripping on my face Yet it isn't real As the rain turns into tears I am living in a dead world Yet it feels I died inside Not able to love the things around You were only a dream No... With you I was awake I could see clearly What was reality The world is all around me Yet now I know That you were my world You made it real... Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What if's There are many for many people. I guess we invent the answers in our heads...or ignore the possibility of an answer completely. 'You were only a dream No... With you I was awake' This is a feeling I knew quite well. Well done, BH...you've written the hurt well. K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
wow. this really describes how I feel. this is so awesome! keep it up!! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Broken Heart: I used to feel this way after my mom passed away when i was 12. I know the light is hard to see right now but one day in time it will peel through. Im sorry for your loss....hope it gets better soon ![]() Ps. I think you were talking about a guy (boyfriend) in this poem though wern't you? Either way it hurts to lose. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Broken_Heart Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 57Netherlands |
Dear SwEeTnSeXy18, This poem is not dedicated to my boyfriend as I have a girlfriend ![]() I'm sorry to hear about your mom, as losing someone precious as your mother is the worst that can happen... Good luck to you sincerely, Broken_Heart Darkness upholds Light as much as Holiness downs the Evil within... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I am living in a dead world Yet it feels I died inside Not able to love the things around these lines really stood out for me BH enjoyed the read, I look forward to reading more of your work ![]() Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Cool poem. I really like the questions about perception and reality, and the way you've addressed them here. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem........i know exactly how this feels......it's a very depressing thing to feel though......damn do i hate it. Hope you're coping better than I. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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