Dark Poetry #2 |
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Outside the building |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
Outside the building In a continuous setting, presenting a smile stuffed with juicy fruit gum and rotting teeth. The old man would greet him every morning outside his office. The young man without intention had vaguely wondered if the old man had once been self adhesive or perhaps even reliant. Reluctantly, the young man had created this stiff tradition, mellowed, only slightly, by the elongated shape he'd place in the aging bum's hand. An appeasement, Cash, to ease the guilt, to purchase food, or the old man's temporary means of escape. He unnerved the young man, this soot-coated reflection, he wished he'd disappear. He was an uncomfortable reminder, that life seldom goes as planned. "I am an abstract of Circles" |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nice to see you drop by..enjoyed as always.. this is one of my favorite forums in passions..i think you will like it..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
thanks Victoria.....I appreciate the warm response ~ S ~ Z |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Isn't that the truth-life never goes as planned. Great images here. Thanks for understanding my poem, also. Sandra |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Suffering we can't alleviate does seem to make us uncomfortable, it's true... great write - and nice to have you here... ![]() |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
Catalinamoon - thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond, yes it makes me very sad to see those less fortunate, and often guilty, because there but for the grace of God go I. Severn, thank you very much for the kind words, I hope to be reading some of yours soon. *S* Z "I am an abstract of Circles" |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
This is a peculiar subject, beautifully displayed in a unqiue form. I did like this quite a lot. Be well. |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
peculiar.....what an unusual, peculiar name ~ grin, i think we might have something in common, it seems we both like "different". Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed my words! I am relatively new myself, but I like to say welcome, and I hope to read some of your work soon! Z "I am an abstract of Circles" |
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