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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Sorrow wraps her cool arm tight around me. The chill of her presence almost to much to bare. She brings with her Pain, Anger, and Hurt. They are to much for me. I can't help but buckle under their pressure. Is this your fault or mine? It's so hard to tell, not that it would help any. She is all I now know, all I think of, all I can feel, all I have left of love. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Sorrow seems to embrace all at some time or another...reminds me of a tale of "Sorrow" that I posted here a while ago.....So well you have captured her in your words!! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Some she embraces...others, she moves in with. Let's hope she moves on out of your life. Nice poem,LiLi.....Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I'm hoping too. I like how you wrote it as a person,...very neat. She visits like an unwanted houseguest,....that takes a while to get clear of. Hang in there. Great expression. Take care now. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I like the way you wrote it too, I hope you both lose the sorrow and fill the vessel with something better and healthier. With or without her it's something you (and we all) must do.. Good stuff hon  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Ouch. (thats how this poem made me feel) Wow! (thats what I said after I finished it) Great job! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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