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Guilt, your Familiar
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Guilt, your Familiar |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
In forest sun In desert rain I'll be with you Where you might run All that you think All that I hear My place is on Your shoulder here Where I can breathe Into your ear I love you for The pain you've spilt Give me a name My name is Guilt Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Uta...words so true and so well expressed. Entire religions are built on guilt. Of course without guilt...and some moral values..there would be chaos. Thanks...Hardrock |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Dont give us all nightmares. Well written. Deepak |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just perfect, the sound, the flow, the words, and the message. Great! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
wow, lothie. this is good. i mean realllllyyyyyy good. i find i make emotions like people too. they have their own motives, it would seem sometimes. once again, excellent piece here, hon.  kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This has a lasting, haunting effect on me. Ooh,...chills at the thought and the weight of it that I carry around. This stands out. Oh and thank you so much for your sweetness and for crossing your fingers for my kitty. Truly kind. Take care. *Peace. |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Good read! Makes one think are we guilty for good reason? Well written. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i'm back for a little while before i move. this is a great piece i really enjoyed the way you form your emotion into a person. outstanding i'll be reading more. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Being someone who feels guilty for everything I wrote this about my father, who feels guilty about nothing. I wish he had this little demon to keep him company, at least from time to time. Why doesn't he borrow mine? Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Guilt is so appropriate when it prevents us from doing harm..very well written, sends a strong message!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
That little demon being a conscience? Your conscience may be a pain and hard to live with at times, but he/it does make you a better person. I know one similar to your Dad and at times the lack of thought and conscience and consideration are unbearable, I know God I know, where you are coming from on this one hon.. Great work I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Ohhhhhhh! Ahhhhhh! Wow! I LOVE your twist endings! Great work! -Wren The thread of destiny Unknown by anyone Unseen by anyone Winds around your heart Moist with tears -Vampire Princess Miyu Theme |
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