Dark Poetry #2 |
What if.........? |
Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
What if there was no love? What if there was no more pain? What if there was no you? Would the world be the same? |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
No Way...Dee |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
It couldn't be the same, something would be missing Without love the world would just suck |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
short and sweet and very good. EVEN ANGELS FALL. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Without love at all, I think the world would have to disintegrate. Without the pain, that would sure be nice...Without the one specific "you", I think we can all go on. But it's hard. Great questions.. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
So well put..I think it's up to each to assess this. This poem makes me think...and I like that. Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes the questions you ask are so true. they express the things i think and ask all the time. man i'm like a three year old. LOL this is great i really enjoyed it and i hope you get your answers I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Would the world be the same? I think not. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
This one stimulates the mind for sure!! Excellent, and Im thinking about my personal answers to this. Very good!!!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really enjoy poetry like this...Loved it!! I want to share with you one of mine...that you might enjoy!! Is it real?? Is it not?? Does he love her?? Does he not?? Is she living in a dream?? Is she playing make believe?? Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
This really moved me ... Simple yet provocative ... verve~ |
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