Dark Poetry #2 |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I am The fog That returns The winter You meet Each afternoon The eyes that Find yours At night Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmmm... Uta.... a great poem! A great expression of so much! Makes one wonder! |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Good one Uta! Great symbolism and expression of emotion. Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
how i do love the expression you use as always this is another great piece from you so do keep it up please. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I love the vivid imagery in this poem! Excellent. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I agree, excellent imagery, very well written!!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I ditto the above...liked it!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"The eyes that find yours at night"...wow, what a rush, Uta!! Gave me those good kind of goosebumps. I'll be reading this one several more times. Hardrock |
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