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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Things... You ask me how I feel and my reply, Every thing You ask me how I died and my reply, All things You ask me how I weep and my reply, Endless things... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful and sad. Very effective. Take care. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~A,...I like this things poem so much. How very neat of one. Has a directness to it...that is definately felt. Be well A. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
I have a tendency to write long poems...but I find my best work in the shorter ones, like this one here. Nice job. Hardrock |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Thank you all for your responses. I was not sure if the poem would make an impact or not for I too am one to normally write longer poems. UNTIL... "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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