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Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-15 01:30 PM

I do not grieve
For having known of you
That strange, passionate
Part of you
That I have known;
Nor do I lament
For having as my own
That fragment of soul
You trusted me, tenderly,
For so short a while;
Nor do I mourn
For having pillaged
Immortality's open door
For remembrance
Of your smile.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-07-15 01:59 PM

I don't consider this dark at all, but instead, a lesson thanked...

fine piece, here...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

demoninlove
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 211
Dehradun

2 posted 2000-07-15 03:08 PM

I do not grieve
For having known of you
That strange, passionate
Part of you
That I have known;

I Wonder at the depth of perception.
Beautiful indeed!
Deepak

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2000-07-15 03:15 PM

Yet again Rex you've written my soul. How do you do it? Never mind, it's obviously talent which you have in abundance. Breathless with amazement, you've stunned me again.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-07-15 03:57 PM

"For having pillaged immortality's open door" What an incredible line, and thought. Very impressive, but then, they always are.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-07-16 11:06 PM

i enjoyed this alot as i do all of your work. and once again i'm here to be amazed by it all i'm reading what i missed so check your replies my friend and my books are coming along great got one more to finish formating and then i am starting to write a movie.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2000-07-16 11:10 PM

Selfless and beautiful my friend.. there should be more like you in this world..

I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-07-17 07:29 AM

Rex this is an excellent title and poem..I enjoyed reading this...James

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

8 posted 2000-07-17 09:18 AM

Rex, my friend...here again you have captured the essence of such love.."having pillaged.....for the remembrance of your smile". Amazing...just amazing. Hardrock

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