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Understanding Death (2 poems actually)
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Understanding Death (2 poems actually) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Sitting here thinking of you All the memories that have come true All the times you laughed and cried You were always there standing by our side A simple hug you gave each day To all the things you would always say To show us love in every way And you knew we loved you each and every day The memories of you will always hold true With your smile as you chased away the blues For my Great Uncle that passed away today. Love ya so much Del  I sit here and question myself For I wanted death to take me So many times I begged for him For I thought only he had the key Yet never once did he look my way Or even let me see the light I just dont understand the ways of Death I sure wouldnt of put up a fight Yet with all my begging and pleading He takes a good soul as you, instead I would trade places with you , if I could I would be the one lying in the coffin , dead! Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
DKW, I think both of these were excellent. The last one sad if you feel badly and think about being gone...Im sure you are a wonderful person and needed here. I know through my struggle with my illness I sometimes dream of a place without pain..Hope your ok, thanks for sharing, Deb1 |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hun *hugs* i know how you feel. i really do. i liked this alot. please read my poem for papa. it reminds me alot of this poem and what you have gone threw. *hugs* we are all here for you hun. and i am always an e-mail or an icq away. i wont let a friend like you go into the darkness so far that you can never come back. i have grown to really like you since i read that poem my dark night. and plus you helped me too. your dark night will come hun. i just hope that i can find a dark princess. *hugs* we are all here for you. love ya, jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Death is a ? We all get to see his face, sometime, I hope not before I am ready. Life is too short to do all we need to do. I do hope you are well,loved,and at peace››››good poetry! Thanx!!!! Click |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DkW...I just read this today. I'm so sorry I wasn't there for you when you wrote this. One line stands out in my mind, "I just don't understand the ways of death". I hope you never do, because with death, understanding does not bring enlightment. Lots of hugs from the Hardrock. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, shoot, I'm sorry I did not see this the day you wrote it. I know that sad and terrible feeling when someone you love dies. Both of the poems were very beautiful. And stick around here with us, we need you way more than death does. Peace, be happy. Catalinamoon "Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly." author unknown |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
I understand losing one that you love. Hope your feelin better today. |
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