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DeathTrippy Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 45WY USA |
Sleep darling Arms enfolding round you An everlasting shroud of safety Protect from danger My love Your armor Sleep love Stay forever Encircled by fire Purifying love My heart Fire Listen dear Soft voice weaves A blanket o're you Sing away the cold My tune Your warmth Laughing inside My prey sleeps well Trapped by my lulaby Deceptive song My feast Your blood |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Deceptive indeed great stuff with a twist at the end. Welcome to passions by the way. I have been out of commission lately and missed your first post??? Welcome  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
DT...great twist there at the end. VERY nicely done, you blood sucker, you!!! Enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew, what a twist. Romance to deception in one stanza! Excellent poem. "Keep dreams alive, for if dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly." author unknown |
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Magebeast Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 60 |
Yet another WOW. I really liked this one. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Once again , no other words accept.......WONDERFUL!!! by any chance, have you been floating around in my head?? : }~ "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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