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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Pursuing me with passion I fell for your Trademark smile Drawing me in deceptively Was your romance..Free-Style I felt the shudder of excitement My mind is in turmoil I sample your lethal kisses Then careen..out of control My throat dry with anticipation More time.. I need to borrow As you dazzle me with False promises.. I will hunger for tomorrow You are a satisfying dish That has graced my lonely table You garnish me with fantasy Free-Style Romance Is my fable Nostalgia is like a grammar lesson...You find the present tense..and the past perfect "Anonymous" |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Deborah....great one! Enjoyed very much. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, nice change of pace here. Nice romantic view from a different perspective. Enjoyed this. jwesley |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
And the South Carolina judge gives it a "10" in this event of the Love Olympics. Nice way of putting it, Deb. You have style...Hardrock |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
I really think this poem needs to be put to music! It has a wonderful lyrical quality that I love....Great poem! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
garnish me with fantasy..great line. And you know how I relate to this one. very smooth and flowing too. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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