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waking in a fright..... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Slowly I opened my eyes Feeling a cold stare It was so overwhelming Something I could not bare I stepped onto the floor Not knowing what I would feel My body begun to shake Wondering if I can heal I slowly walked forward Reaching my hand out I felt a warm hand on mine Not knowing what its about My body was pulled inward I was thrown onto the floor I heard a loud crash It was the closing of the door I wanted to scream so loudly To kick and to run I wanted to be set free For I wanted to see the sun My mouth was covered and gagged My hands were tied so tight "GOD help me through this" I said As my body trembled in fright I knew it was up to me only I must set myself free So I closed my eyes tightly And thought of happiness to be You see... this abductor was not a man It was the demon within me I left my heart open A home he thought he could see Another battle I have won On this July's eve I drift back to sleep For myself I do believe Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Truly excellent poem Dark...I relate very well to what you've expressed and I must say you've hit it right on the mark.  I like how you showed your strength and courage in the end....never giving up...'twas a great read! Angel< !signature--> Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Dreams often touch on the edge of reality, playing on our fears, forcing us into confrontations, often with ourselves. Sounds like yours do too...Nicely done. Hardrock |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Well, not bad. I think that we all have little demons in our souls waiting to pounce at our innocent hearts...  --the little one |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, with a good surprise ending.. It read like a story, you could see it happening. Very vivid. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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