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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Come with me Lets toss our cares and troubles in the dust We can prance in our own parade We will feel the fury of freedom as we explore the horizens Together... We share the spirit-lifting view thats aglow with colorful keepsakes..Rich Reds, Deep Golds Listen to the wind in the leaves Nipping at our heels Hold my hand Together.. We can renew our energies Unleash our sorrows..softly, slowly Cast away all shadows of doubt Willing hearts... Add color to a black and white photo |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
So true Deb....great stuff. I never miss one of your poems..candy for my soul. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Now this one, I get...Nice feeling, if only I could have it again. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
So sweet Hardrock...many thanks, and yours hold many inspirations,always looking forward to more.. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
feel the fury of freedom And what a fury when it is finally realized! Like this line! Christopher |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Good poem I like the line "Lets toss our cares and troubles in the dust" Such care-free thoughts! that's how I like to think ^_~ "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I love this: a breath of fresh air! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is terrific!  Enjoyed it very much! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
"you can never take are freedom"-Sir William Wallace. one of the greatest men to ever live i think. your poem just made me think about being free and such which we are not. there are to many laws with to many law breakers. i really enjoyed this poem and now i have to watch Brave Heart. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Great poem Deb I wish it was all that easy to do... but HEY gotta have them there hopes  Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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