Dark Poetry #2 |
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Long Time |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
A long time ago, I have myself to blame. I'd turned my back on you, when you called my name. Now the time it passes, but still it moves so slow, I just can't believe it, that I'd let you go. I watched you give up, and turn you heart away. I looked on in silence, without a word to say. For too long I waited, hoping you would see. That all I really wanted, was you to come back to me. I reached out too late, you were already gone. What good would it do me? to say that I was wrong. The time we had together, seems so long ago. Did we even have a chance? now I'll never know. Click [This message has been edited by Click (edited 06-15-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Click,....you WILL never know if you don't give it a try. Refering to... ~What good would it do me? to say that I was wrong. ~Aaaww,...this is a sorrowful poem here. Expressed well. Thanks for sharing. *Peace. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yes, a sad poem indeed. But you should always let people know what you feel, least you regret it for the rest of your life! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... "lots" of emotion here. Great poem ![]() |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
God my friend this hurt so much, what a way with a pen you have. If this is in your life then my heart out to you, if not then you have looked into mine, I have reached out maybe to late as now. Anyway great job on the tear. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I don't believe it's ever too late to reach out! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Night Chica Junior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 39Vermont |
Wow. This is an emotional topic I'm sure many people have experienced. It is a sad one indeed, but as the others have said, it is never too late to reach out. After all, you will never know only if you do not try, and that is one of the worst mistakes a person could make in their life. Hang in there. ~* Megs *~ I was never one to patiently pick up broken fragments and glue them together again and tell myself that the mended whole was as good as new. What is broken is broken- and I'd rather remember it as it was at its best than mend it and see the broken places as long as I lived. -- Margaret Mitchell |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Click, Great poem and I think you should try..Hope to see more. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Great poem i love it and had to print. this is one of the best yet. i hope to read more of you. so keep posting. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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