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As time goes bye
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As time goes bye |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
As I look out this window Watching, waiting As time goes bye Hoping for the chance To take my ride Along side The other clocks ticking As time goes bye I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This was an interesting poem indeed. Was your spelling of "by" as "bye" a pun? |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
no the spelling of by was not a pun. it was meant to be like that expressing the leaving of time as it goes away and life gets shorter.until the alarm goes off and its over. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
hell JJ . I'm waiting for time to go bye,bye, to. I liked this one, it was different. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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