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Passion of Desire (Re-post would like comments) |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York 
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Looking into your eyes I see your passion that does not hide Longing to hold you, so close and near To feel your body so soft and dear Quiet of the night, peaceful the sound Gentle kisses, the romantic allure Soft rains, rhythmic beats all around Glancing touches that are so pure Candles flicker the flames abound Holding you tight, is our passions cure Whisper breezes that fill the night Our natural intentions we can not fight The smell of your perfume fills the air My fingers explore your skin so fair My Fingertips give lingering glances Pleasures of desire no longer in question On your silk smooth skin, I take chances Seeking a revelation of self expression Moving my fingers in midnight passions My heart beats faster with much devotion Eyes that share sensations of lust The exact moment of intimate, trust Lips that meet, caressed with delight Tongues dance all through the night Bodies close and ever so near Enveloping life’s rhythmic passions Wanting, yearning love so dear Surrenders of body and souls Ecstasy of two shows no fear Senses confess with the essence of submissions Ravished with pleasure we lay through the night Talking and exploring we hold each other tight Feelings of love and feelings of tranquility Our passions of desire not left a mystery Taken by the pain of soon parting We savour our romantic encounter An experience that will last forever As if time stopped or didn’t matter You are a dream of pure beauty In my heart you live an eternity |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
*sigh* Woah.... such a beautiful tranquil poem... how wonderful!!!  Written very well indeed! You have a good talent! |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
A beautiful story, well told...enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Lar, I like this too, especially the end, "as if time stopped or didn't matter". Whew, thats a true one. The rest of it was beautiful and happy, but at the end you feel a loss coming, that lonliness after its over. Great poem. Take care Sandra |
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Musicmaker1969
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
Wow! You got my heart beating. How beautifully written. Such a passionate poem. I never read the first, but if it was anything like this, it would have been warming, passionate and enticing. Would like my boyfriend to read this one when he wakes up  D! Incredible!!!/¯¯\ /¯¯\ | ¥ | [email protected] \ Sheri / \Rob / Created by: Muad'dib \ / \/ |
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