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lotharingia
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since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

0 posted 2000-07-08 05:24 AM

a shade of glass
you see him not
his cloak of dark rays
lures you into
an astral void
displacing tomorrow
veiling today

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

1 posted 2000-07-08 06:47 AM

Can we look forward to part 3 I hope so, loving so far.

"Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

2 posted 2000-07-08 08:11 AM

"Fabulous" just about sums it up I reckon

I too look forward to number III!!!

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

3 posted 2000-07-08 09:51 PM

Wonderful! (want more!)

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

4 posted 2000-07-09 06:16 AM

Thanks all for enjoying! But I'm afraid Morpheus is not inspiring me at the moment: I'm suffering from insomnia!
Maybe a third poem will be written eventually, though.

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

insect
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since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

5 posted 2000-07-09 04:16 PM

This one is great too!

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

6 posted 2000-07-09 08:26 PM

'Tis better to sleep with Morpheus then Prince Valium.....Uta, great pieces (I & II). And yes, you are correct, that is exactly where the name Morphine comes from. Loved them both. Hardrock

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

7 posted 2000-07-09 11:59 PM

wonderful poem kind of remind me of Morpheus in the movie " The matrix" enjoyed the read very much and i also can't wait to see number three.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

8 posted 2000-07-10 11:48 AM

Thanks again folks, and Jeremiah, now that I know you are a Greek God I'd better start believing!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

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