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The Kiss |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Only God knows what to do with this kiss, Because I am unworthy to feel more. The powdery soft lips say so much more than you think. Playing games with your heart, I mean not to harm you, I'm afraid of letting go, I'm afraid it'll mean so much more. Crying on your shoulder, Wishing things would change, I want to be what you need, I need to be what you want. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
but???? very nice Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yes, things can be confusing at times. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
could never figure love out myself, enjoyed this poem. "The stars will explode in the sky O but they don't, do they? Stars have their moment and then they die" Nick Cave |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Terrific poem!  You've expressed this very well! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Jenn, maybe you are what he wants and needs. Give yourself a chance. Nice poem, I liked the first line especially. Boy have I felt like that before. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Love the first stanza! Great job! |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
as i love all of your work this one is great as well and i do hope you get what you want cause i feel you should. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you all for your responses....I do think too much, and one day hopefully I will know what I want... Jenn |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Love is so complicated, but never short-change yourself, I know that feeling. You did an excellent job here..true emotions |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
By replying to this it'll repost it... I like this poem, and I want everyone to read it.... Jenn |
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