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Dark Poetry #2

Heart of Confusion

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-08-21 10:20 PM

Radiant heart, once glowing bright
now shadow bound, love out of sight.

Longing met with disregard
unsure why she tries so hard.

Dreams, unable to fulfill
heart confused, it lingers still.

Love remembered as before
lonely life she so deplores.

He wants her still, she knows it's so
but countless hurdles yet to go.

He acts aloof, she wonders how
to keep the faith, she wants him now.

Answers are not yet revealed
heart must question what is real.

Open heart so filled with pain
looks for sun, finds only rain.

Truth and consequence will rule
she may turn out a bitter fool.

But when he holds her close again
he'll prove himself true love or friend.

The verdict is not rendered yet
about this love she can't forget.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 08-21-2000).]

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

1 posted 2000-08-21 10:32 PM

Never forget kid, but put it to the side, and move on in life.
great way of expressing a longing in love untouchable. But rememberable.

As always love your work kid.

I’ll howl tonight for ?? loss. till the sirens run me away.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-08-22 02:44 PM

Joel, thanks for looking at this. Its nice to see you here for a visit. You should stay awhile..
cat..

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

3 posted 2000-08-22 04:37 PM

Hey Cat

Another one of your poems I ABSOLUTELY adore!
"But when he holds her close again
he'll prove himself true love or friend."
So true...
Take care now!

Dedreia
Member

since 2000-07-10

Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

4 posted 2000-08-23 07:59 PM

Keep the faith my friend...Love ya, Dee

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

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