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No Closure
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No Closure |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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Dusty Ball jars forgotten in damp ground cellar, preserved time not found, unfilled. Double Sealy, firmed and cloaked with finest imported silks lacing her fingertips, slept in, unmade. Garden rows straight but overgrown, weeds taller than the fruit of labor, unpicked. Love relationship, born prematurely to the immature, umbilical cord left intact too long, ironically, drew life out of both. There is no closure to be found. chanson~ |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
HOT, HOT, HOT. Someone poet is on fire. Great work. Simply amazing.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Xeonox, I'm glad you stopped in and enjoyed! ...chanson~ |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
no closure is a killer of emotions..isn't it...sometimes you wonder which is worse the knowing why or the never knowing.. ~~soft hugs chanson~~ keep expressing, I enjoy Maureen |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Very true....left hanging, no answer, no reason, no closure....isn't fun, isn't fair. Thank you for reading....and more. ...chanson~ |
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