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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
smoke from an incense stick twisting all around candle flame burning you are in that flame. perhaps you don't realize you are part of everything I think, do, am. when I light a candle it is for you as is the cinnamon the purple "egyptian plum" ... everything. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
It's 1966 again...darkened room just off Haight Street in San Francisco...I can smell the incense, see the flame. Great imagery, Portia....nicely done. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Another beautiful piece, Portia. Very atmospheric imagery! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Feel the smoke in my eyes...Very apt description of that feeling of being so immersed in someone.. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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