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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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TRAPPED Everything I see, Everything I hear, Trapped inside my head, all because of fear. Fear of what they'll think, Fear of what they'll say, Afraid of everyone, Afraid of everyday. I'm the only one that hurts. Noone else knows why. Feelings that I keep within, how I never cry. Don't know where to turn, I'm my only friend. Noone else to trust, can't wait 'til the end! "Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall." LOVE ELMO |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I sure have felt like this a lot lately. Very emotional. Don't give up on anything, ok? Things always get better. Even when it seems impossible, they still will. Take care Catalinamoon |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I hope this isn't about you, but if it is, I agree with cat! Don't give up, things can only get better! Great poem, BTW Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
thanx every1 i'm a very shy person & this kinda explains why  LOVE ELMO <3 |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... yes, this is a very emotional poem. When we are feeling vulnerable inside sometimes we always wonder what people will think... Holding your feelings inside can be very hurtful, so I am glad you are expressing yourself here in your poetry. A very good poem! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
To find someone that we can trust with our feelings is very hard to do/ Im glad your here writing, this was a wonderful poem, keep them coming, and hope your having a happy day. Sending (((smiles)))) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very well said Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Elmo...I have the same feelings at times. You are not alone. Hang in there...it gets better every day. Hardrock |
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