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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA 
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Jackals The loneliness comes, with sharpened claws, Like jackals. Rendering my flesh, leaving only the skeleton of my soul, To bleach in the desert of my reality. I am alone…..so alone. Marv Hardin 07/04/00 |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ouch, the pain of being alone. Its so hard. Vivid description to say the least. S "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Hauntingly sad! Hope You don't feel that way...I enjoyed it very much!!! ~Sash~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~The image you have poetically painted for me is frighteningly real. To be that alone, is to truly know pain. Goodness,...*sigh*, wonderfully written little piece. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
hardrock... I know all too well how lonilness can feel like its consuming you... great way to put it into words... Cyndey "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
*sniff* This one broke my heart, Marvin! What a desolate image. Do you really feel like this? I hope not. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Great work Marv!!! Excellent images and a terrific title. Super my friend. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i know how you feel my friend. i to am alone i'm going out with a girl i don't get along if and i can't break up with her right now cause my best friend is going out with her friend and if i break up with her it puts my friend in the middle. and i can't do that to him. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
This poem screams in agony! This is incredible......Wow! |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Wow, very sharp image, I see the heart exposed, excellent work!! Hope your not sad though. This said alot...Just remember anytime your sad you think of my head in that icebox....(lol) Deb1 |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Critical thinkers such as ourselves have experienced your pain. Great words. |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear Marv Great, touching piece my friend. This one really hurts... been there too... Loved it... keep it up I always enjoy your work... Luv Sylvia |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Very vivid and sad. Excellent work. Very imaginitive way of describing a desperate loneliness........ |
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