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Lonelypoet
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 123
Conklin,NY,USA

0 posted 2000-07-06 10:30 PM

Lonely heart.
Lonely dreams.
Lonely poet with a lonely soul.
That is what I see when,
The sight of the twisted image is
seen.
Life’s goblet poisoned by memories
of pain and betrayal and loss.
Unaccepted.
Unloved.
Maybe I need help,
Maybe I don’t.
But I do know that I’m your friend.
So accept me,
but you won't.
Don't mock me,
But they shall.
I feel as if I kneel
on the stony path day
by day.
Please, my love help.

{Thanx Tracie66 for the title}

Dreams are the the gateways to making the impossible possible

a_little_girl
Member

since 2000-05-08

Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA

1 posted 2000-07-06 10:35 PM

Well, we all have to dream sometime in our lives...and dreaming is what powers mankind to live. Without our dreams, where would we be?
--the little one

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2000-07-06 10:43 PM

..."lonely heart...lonely dreams...lonely soul..." yep, definitely a "Dark Passions Poet!" And these, in turn, enhance both your writing and life experience. Thanks for the read.

jwesley

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2000-07-07 01:29 AM

Yo bud, you ain't alone in this game of loneliness. I hear you loud and clear. Depressing poem, yet very well said.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2000-07-07 01:40 AM

lonely all around it seems.
Alone does not have to be lonely
and everyone who is lonely is not alone.
Very nice poem

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

5 posted 2000-07-07 02:16 PM

Great piece of writing here...

You have my vote.

We truly feel with you... what a great way to put it.
Thanks for sharing.

Sylvia

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

6 posted 2000-07-07 02:38 PM

It funny how sometimes we feel alone even when we are with someone, or alone, its hard to fill the loneliness but it can be done. A very good poem, keep it up!!

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