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Dark Poetry #2

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Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-07-05 07:47 PM

In all the world
There are so many things
Things to want and love

All throughout life
There will come things
In and Out

But somehow threw it all
You always come back to me
Why I will never know why

I try to love others
But I always lead back to you
You just will not let me go

Why do you still love me so
I go off to others
You just wait for my return

Yet I am young
I do not need to settle
How do you know so sure I will return

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

1 posted 2000-07-05 08:03 PM

This is great! The theme of fated love is great! I esspecially like the last line!

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

2 posted 2000-07-06 02:56 PM

wonderful poem and such truth behind it how can we settle down when were still young and don't truely love because we must commit first. love it keep it up.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

3 posted 2000-07-06 07:43 PM

Thank you glad you liked it!
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

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