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The Haunting Poem
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The Haunting Poem |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
God, I want this too much I feel as if my heart might burst! When will my heartache mend? I even wonder if it would ever end? How can I make my life feel complete? If my Soul-Mate does indeed exist, Will we ever meet? Or will we forever be walking on opposite ends of the street, As a part of Fate's game with a twist? In this game, Can the odds be beaten? Or will we forever feel As if we have been cheated? All this makes my mind spin and reel... My heart just isn't made of steel. In this book, I feel so exposed! Yet, It's better than keeping them inside I suppose. I have grown weary of this game, With my cards I want to fold! Bring this haunting poem to a close! "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...this is like a gushing cry. Well written longing for answers. Take care. *Peace. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Me too, Cyndey, I know just how you feel. Take care. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Life is a never ending poem...and like all poetry, there is good and bad, happy and sad, dark and light...The answer: Be the Poet Hardrock |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes be that great thing that you are here to us and yourself your a great poet so be that. i like all of your work here and hope to see that you keep it up. and i eally enjoyed this piece and hope to see more real soon. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Thanks guys! That means a lot to hear such kind words of encouragement! I suppose there is really no way out of being "the poet" unless one just refuses to write... its in our blood,no? Something to ponder... Cyndey ;o) "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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Holly Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 127Arkansas |
Cyney (in the words of Alex-LOL)- Your first true attempt at this rhyme game is a wonderful one! I'm very proud of you! It's wonderful work and not to mention...it flows soooooo well girl. I swear you need to STOP reading my mind though...haha. It's great work Cyn!  love, -Holly I know well what I am fleeing from but not what I am in search of. Michel de Montaigne |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Well, ahhh-Holly, LOL  Can't help it if great minds think alike! hehehe  Thanks a million for being such a great friend~! Sometimes I just don't know what I'd do w/o you!  Cyndey "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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