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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Close your eyes Close your lips feel the wind on your fingertips Does it feel cold? Does it feel warm? Do you feel bold? Is there a storm? Are you crying inside your mind? is your heart flying or are you blind? Now, take this image lock it up tight remember it on a lonely night P.S. I just wanted to let everyone know, I'm not gonna beg for you to vote for any of my poems LOL, only vote if you really feel one of them is worthy. |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Another excellent poem, Chibi. Took me on a trip to a lonely cliff at dusk. BTW, I didn't get the option to vote for this one, I would've if I could've. (I wish the editor wouldn't kep eating half my letters, does that only happen to me?) Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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ChibiDeathscythe Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 128 |
Evil editor, bad, bad!  |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is another great from you as i enjoy all of your work that i read which is all since i've been on here. this is just as good and wish you would have summited this one you would have my vote. keep it up my friend. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Are you crying inside your mind???,....Uuummm,..yes actually, I do that pretty often. Ouch. Super neat post here. *Peace. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lonely nights, so many for us all. This was a great poem. I would've voted for it too. Catalinamoon "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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