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Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2000-07-02 01:12 AM

I hear the voice whispering
      Calling my name
And i know if i chose to follow
   i won't come out the
          Same
Then who will be to blame?
Locked inside this chamber
    Covered in chains
Internally felt nothing but pain
     Life sucked out
  Through this open vein.
  Locked down going insane

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2000-07-02 04:38 AM

Woah! This one is a very deep poem indeed.

I hear the voice whispering
      Calling my name
And i know if i chose to follow
   i won't come out the
          Same

Those voices can be a real pain soemtimes!  Good poem Jeremiah

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

2 posted 2000-07-02 07:07 AM

Wow! I wish you had submitted this one for the book, too. You express the lure of insanity so well!

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

Deborah1
Senior Member

since 2000-06-22

Posts 653
New Hampshire

3 posted 2000-07-02 07:32 AM

I still find it amazing how one is able to express a certain emotion or thought, this was very powerful to me, and I think its very very good.

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2000-07-03 08:08 PM

Ah. JJ I went insain in 75, never recovered.
love light.
Joel

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

5 posted 2000-07-03 09:31 PM

I don't hear voices. Yes, you do. No, I don't. Yes, you do. NO, I DON'T....now leave me alone so I can respond to JJ's poem. *****!! What did you say? nothing. Ah hem...as I was saying JJ, this poem is so right on....Hardrock.
(I can't believe you said that. Well, you started it...................)Just ignore him, JJ....he's a troublemaker.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

6 posted 2000-07-05 07:37 PM

Voices drive one crazy as you have stated in your poem. Who or what is your muse my friend for all these lovely poem you write? Good work

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

7 posted 2000-07-06 10:05 AM

~Ok,..."And i know if i chose to follow i won't come out the Same"....WoW!!! I love all that you write Jeremiah. Take care. *Peace.

ChibiDeathscythe
Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 128

8 posted 2000-07-06 10:34 AM

Wow....all your poems are so intense. Keep up the awesome work

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2000-07-06 11:59 AM

Jeremiah, I must have missed this before, this is incredible. One of my favorites from you. Yeah, the voices, and who is to know which ones want to help us and which ones want to hurt.
Take care
Catalinamoon

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